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looking back...
we were just kids, sitting in the park,
talking about all the things we'd do
when we grew up, but we never did...
Published 19th Feb 2015
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19th Feb 2015 1:50am
19th Feb 2015 10:27am
19th Feb 2015 3:24am
I never experienced that, talk about growing up.
An aside, my sis and I - we were about 6 and 8 years old - we were both infatuated with a neighbour, maybe 24 years old. And we said, alrighty then we'll share him.
An aside, my sis and I - we were about 6 and 8 years old - we were both infatuated with a neighbour, maybe 24 years old. And we said, alrighty then we'll share him.
19th Feb 2015 10:29am
That's a reassuring poem, Paul.
It's always healthy to keep a part
of the child you've once been (or were?)
within yourself (so still are :-)).
It's always healthy to keep a part
of the child you've once been (or were?)
within yourself (so still are :-)).
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