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eachother
we need eachother....
in times of private pain,
of fear and stress
we need eachother...
to share our joys,
ourtimes of happiness
we need eachother....
to hold on and be strong,
and encourage when things are going wrong
we need eachother....
to keep the faith and love,
and remind eachother of all the things we are dreaming of,
we need eachother....now and always
that ones for you baby girl.
in times of private pain,
of fear and stress
we need eachother...
to share our joys,
ourtimes of happiness
we need eachother....
to hold on and be strong,
and encourage when things are going wrong
we need eachother....
to keep the faith and love,
and remind eachother of all the things we are dreaming of,
we need eachother....now and always
that ones for you baby girl.
Published 10th May 2011
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10th May 2011 2:03am
"
we need eachother....
in times of private pain,
of fear and stress "
Best part of the whole poem. The word "private" is a wonderful and different word to use. You used it in a way that capture the reader. An element of mystery. Well written, easily one of my favorites!
we need eachother....
in times of private pain,
of fear and stress "
Best part of the whole poem. The word "private" is a wonderful and different word to use. You used it in a way that capture the reader. An element of mystery. Well written, easily one of my favorites!
10th May 2011 2:11am
thank you so much im kinda new to poetry....so my stuff might not be the best
