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Despina's Kiss
Two gloriously wounded souls
a man, profoundly lost
a woman, who had sought forever
met upon a breeze
picnicking in the dark wood.
Oh how they delighted
in the pleasures laid before them on the rug
drinking in the potential they had uncorked
gorging on a lavish feast of flesh.
Melancholy oaks bowed their heads softly
to view the tender festivities
Ethereal rock faces nodded knowingly
as the two took their fill
and the breeze?
The breeze whispered around their contentment
As for a brief moment
in a womb of leaves
neither were searching
both had found nature's way
a man, profoundly lost
a woman, who had sought forever
met upon a breeze
picnicking in the dark wood.
Oh how they delighted
in the pleasures laid before them on the rug
drinking in the potential they had uncorked
gorging on a lavish feast of flesh.
Melancholy oaks bowed their heads softly
to view the tender festivities
Ethereal rock faces nodded knowingly
as the two took their fill
and the breeze?
The breeze whispered around their contentment
As for a brief moment
in a womb of leaves
neither were searching
both had found nature's way
Published 9th May 2011
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9th May 2011 3:09pm
This is brilliant.. a few minor grammatical errors (i get them too lol)
a woman, who had sough forever (sought?)
picnicing in the dark wood.(picnicking)
drinking in the potential they had uncocked (uncorked?)
Other than those little things, this is absolutely stunning. I love it
a woman, who had sough forever (sought?)
picnicing in the dark wood.(picnicking)
drinking in the potential they had uncocked (uncorked?)
Other than those little things, this is absolutely stunning. I love it
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