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no help...
he thought he'd heard
mice underneath the floor boards...
she said you'll have to
pull them up -
he said I don't actually think
they're stuck...
mice underneath the floor boards...
she said you'll have to
pull them up -
he said I don't actually think
they're stuck...
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Re: no help...
12th Feb 2015 2:06am
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Re: no help...
12th Feb 2015 3:02am
I've been in a house with mice and cats up in the ceiling, it's impossible to get to sleep.
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12th Feb 2015 10:51pm
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14th Feb 2015 6:51am
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12th Feb 2015 3:57am
You don't live through a mouse running up your leg, in bed, without psychological trauma. If I hear so much as a mouse fart, I'll tear the house apart.
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12th Feb 2015 10:53pm
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12th Feb 2015 8:57am
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21st Feb 2015 1:52am
Makes me think of rat's in the walls or to a lesser extent a small section of pickman's model.
It's almost dark in it's connotation
Perhaps if I was at all scared of mice than it would seem more so
None the less it gives that queezy feeling
Yet instantly you force life back with your wit
As I imagine is more often than not going to be the case with you, loved it
It's almost dark in it's connotation
Perhaps if I was at all scared of mice than it would seem more so
None the less it gives that queezy feeling
Yet instantly you force life back with your wit
As I imagine is more often than not going to be the case with you, loved it
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re: Re: no help...
21st Feb 2015 11:06am
thanks, I'm not particularly
bothered about mice, myself,
but then there's no point
upsetting them, I always
feel..:)
bothered about mice, myself,
but then there's no point
upsetting them, I always
feel..:)
Re. no help...
8th Jul 2016 3:44pm
I've always had cats...never had mice. Wonder if there's a correlation? Enjoyed this one! :)
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8th Jul 2016 4:06pm