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Some candles shouldn't be lit
Perfectly imperfect
...from the start...
It swepted over me,
swift...'twas a dreaded red squall.
T m l n h l l s l , I o t s n e o up from clown.
u b i g e p e s y l s e s f
Yeah, there was far too much dancing in my head to be still...
...until it was said.
So I would say in the end it'd be better...
...that there was no start.
Unless...of course there wasn't,
only one held a burning candle within the heart.
Checking back, you shouldn't have given whatever
it could have been a snowball's chance.
Knowing how off putting it seemed...
..you were right to barely give a glance.
Saying there was never a flame is better,
so on this candle I placed a lid to choke out the tamed.
...from the start...
It swepted over me,
swift...'twas a dreaded red squall.
T m l n h l l s l , I o t s n e o up from clown.
u b i g e p e s y l s e s f
Yeah, there was far too much dancing in my head to be still...
...until it was said.
So I would say in the end it'd be better...
...that there was no start.
Unless...of course there wasn't,
only one held a burning candle within the heart.
Checking back, you shouldn't have given whatever
it could have been a snowball's chance.
Knowing how off putting it seemed...
..you were right to barely give a glance.
Saying there was never a flame is better,
so on this candle I placed a lid to choke out the tamed.
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