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Flatter me with poetry
Can you flatter me with poetry?
To let me know you are still alive and openly
Can you send me your heartfelt desires?
Through an evening of playing with fires
Can you tell me about your life?
And how you choose to live
Can you flatter me with lyrics?
About our bodies and physics
Can you write to me like you did before?
Can you write to me I want to know more
Can you give me the details?
Even though I know this ship has sailed.
To let me know you are still alive and openly
Can you send me your heartfelt desires?
Through an evening of playing with fires
Can you tell me about your life?
And how you choose to live
Can you flatter me with lyrics?
About our bodies and physics
Can you write to me like you did before?
Can you write to me I want to know more
Can you give me the details?
Even though I know this ship has sailed.
Published 3rd Feb 2015
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Commenting Preference:
The author encourages honest critique.
I enjoy your every line
Each word polished to a brilliant shine
Established in its proper place
And delivered with a nuanced grace
This is exactly what I seek
To praise you with honest critique.
Each word polished to a brilliant shine
Established in its proper place
And delivered with a nuanced grace
This is exactly what I seek
To praise you with honest critique.
3rd Feb 2015 8:22pm
Why thank you kind sir
Even though i know its not what you prefer
You always give such nice appraisal
Your words form such a nice phrasal
As always thanks for the coment
I hope you really enjoyed the content
Even though i know its not what you prefer
You always give such nice appraisal
Your words form such a nice phrasal
As always thanks for the coment
I hope you really enjoyed the content
8th Feb 2015 6:49pm
I won't try any further rhymes at this point. Just wanted to say I do enjoy your content along with your style. You have a lot to say and a fine way of saying it.
4th Feb 2015 11:40am
4th Feb 2015 12:00pm
