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Make me
Devour my heart in your grasp
Take my breath with your mouth
Leave the bruises
Take the blood
Make me scream
Make me smile
Make me beg on my knees
Make me cry
Squeeze me, keep me safe
Bite me, taste my skin
Touch me, make me yours
Kiss me, make me live
Don't leave me Jeremy,
Ever.
Love me,
Always.
Take my breath with your mouth
Leave the bruises
Take the blood
Make me scream
Make me smile
Make me beg on my knees
Make me cry
Squeeze me, keep me safe
Bite me, taste my skin
Touch me, make me yours
Kiss me, make me live
Don't leave me Jeremy,
Ever.
Love me,
Always.
Published 4th May 2011
| Edited 5th May 2011
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- Edited 5th May 2011 1:24am
5th May 2011 00:41am
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5th May 2011 1:11am
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5th May 2011 1:19am
its exzactly what im trying to say in not so many words.
thank you for taking the time to actually read analyze and break down my poem it was odd how you got what i was trying to say.
thank you
thank you for taking the time to actually read analyze and break down my poem it was odd how you got what i was trying to say.
thank you
12th May 2011 1:25am
Poor Jeremy. Tell me, how long have you delved into the sick-and-twisted world that is BDSM? And has Jeremy known this all along?
12th May 2011 1:46am
12th May 2011 4:27am
13th May 2011 6:07pm
oh yeah bdsm i forgot wa that meant well me AND jeremy have been into bdsm for a couple months its hell of a lot more fun then regular sex and shit
