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the last farewell
should i stay
should i go
tell me if im appreciated
because i dont know
its been good to know you
it's been good fun
iv'e got nothing left do
but run.
iv'e done my work here
i feel complete
i dont think im ever coming back
we shall never meet
iv'e tried so hard
to fit in with the crowd
but i am who i am
i have to stop dreaming in that dark cloud
i will lift you from darkness
you will now walk into the light
make the most of this one
because this will be the last poem i shall ever write!
should i go
tell me if im appreciated
because i dont know
its been good to know you
it's been good fun
iv'e got nothing left do
but run.
iv'e done my work here
i feel complete
i dont think im ever coming back
we shall never meet
iv'e tried so hard
to fit in with the crowd
but i am who i am
i have to stop dreaming in that dark cloud
i will lift you from darkness
you will now walk into the light
make the most of this one
because this will be the last poem i shall ever write!
Published 4th May 2011
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4th May 2011 8:46pm
i cant even write poems so u should stay this site cause u have a poem talent i should be the 1 who leaves the site not u
4th May 2011 8:48pm
thank you even if i do stay i will need to take a break from this site for a while- you can write kora keep trying!
4th May 2011 8:51pm
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5th May 2011 5:16am
You shouldn't let peeps BS affect you that much...everyone has their opinion...I do as well...I could fing care less what other people think about me! I write what I want and how I want it...I take criticism as well as the next guy or gal does and move on...I have got in tiffs with others on this site, but I educate myself and see their perspective as well as my own...in the end we end up respecting each other more because of that...I know I am rambling aren't I? Its sad to see you go...it just means that everyone else has won...;( Never give up and never surrender! If you have to take a break go ahead and do so...just don't throw away your talent!
5th May 2011 10:25am
Now now now, what a sadly executed piece of work. It is lacking in all things poetic... Essentially a nursery rhyme, and a self-indulgent one. Simply ugly.
5th May 2011 3:29pm
even if i am staying i still need a break for a while but i wont write that often.......
5th May 2011 5:30pm
If you leave this site then so do i. Think of how many people's lives you changed with your insight. I've had people tel me i inspire the m or i prevented them from cutting or some other bullshit. You have talent, talent that i only see in myself and very few others. Please keep writing, if not for you then for me! </3
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