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You unfurl
beneath me
uncreased
my lilywhite
seductress
for you know
I cannot resist
Forever belying
like a snowy
meadow
blanketing
buds
adrift
in reveries
In wicked times
blanched ambrosia
a succulent
pome -
just out of reach
Perhaps
this why
I always return
to spill my
ink
on your
chaste skin
as you lie
bare and beguiling
listening
longing
for my footsteps
like wet cement
beneath me
uncreased
my lilywhite
seductress
for you know
I cannot resist
Forever belying
like a snowy
meadow
blanketing
buds
adrift
in reveries
In wicked times
blanched ambrosia
a succulent
pome -
just out of reach
Perhaps
this why
I always return
to spill my
ink
on your
chaste skin
as you lie
bare and beguiling
listening
longing
for my footsteps
like wet cement
Published 16th Jan 2015
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16th Jan 2015 10:29pm
I enjoy the contradictions you play with. For example the perpetually "chaste" paper, though the narrator "always return[s] to spill [...] ink." The last lines are also fun. Who can resist wet cement? ^_^
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Anonymous
17th Jan 2015 2:07am
oh this! this is a perfect picture of the affair between writer and paper. very good!
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18th Jan 2015 6:59pm
my thoughts turn to Galadriel from Lord Of The Rings in reading this.
The concluding line at first seemed odd but with a bit more brain power it looked like a great fit
The concluding line at first seemed odd but with a bit more brain power it looked like a great fit
18th Jan 2015 7:24pm
