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i hate you
Laying here next to you takes my breath away, I'm so into you I don't know what to say, my head on your chest, I try so hard to rest but I'm taking it all in this is the happiest I've ever been, I wanna be so close to you I can jump in your skin, don't wanna move to fast, I want forever to last, I wanna sleep with you every night, you feel so right, hang onto you so tigh, forever in my heart, I pray we never part
Published 16th Jan 2015
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16th Jan 2015 4:28am
what a lovely write... quite beautiful. and the contrast of the title is certainly thought provoking. good stuff! =D
16th Jan 2015 5:09am
16th Jan 2015 7:37am
19th Jan 2015 8:48pm
No offense, but women love more with their emotions. That's when confusion within their hearts set in.
19th Jan 2015 10:19pm
Sure that could be true for some but there's no confusion on my part. My heart and my emotions are on the same page
