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between us
As nothing walks steadily between us,
I find his voice in the absence of yours.
His words, those you choose not to speak,
condemn all hope and echo,
as only silences can,
the composition of our
goodbye
I find his voice in the absence of yours.
His words, those you choose not to speak,
condemn all hope and echo,
as only silences can,
the composition of our
goodbye
Published 14th Jan 2015
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15th Jan 2015 1:06am
brings to mind the words of an old song: 'she said I felt so all alone, I found someone of my own.'
it's a fine poem you have here...
it's a fine poem you have here...
Anonymous
15th Jan 2015 1:08am
oh goodness. a tight, powerful poem you have here. very good.
15th Jan 2015 3:20am
This is simple yet beautiful. Tells a story that goes deeper than you would think
