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the truth
she never expected
anything from him
except
that he never stop
loving her
how dare she aim so high
anything from him
except
that he never stop
loving her
how dare she aim so high
Published 8th Jan 2015
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8th Jan 2015 2:29pm
the audacity of hoping for something so simple...
... the brevity of this piece really adds to its punch. a great write, JeJe, much enjoyed
... the brevity of this piece really adds to its punch. a great write, JeJe, much enjoyed
8th Jan 2015 7:50pm
Thank You so much katja for the read and thoughtful comments always appreciated...ox
9th Jan 2015 3:49am
that's a very sad write. there are a lot of dreamers in that same boat...
9th Jan 2015 5:45am
Thank You JohnFeddeler for the read and your comment...which suddenly brought Shakespeare to my mind..."Perchance to Dream"...no harm can come from that... 😊
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