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sensually brown
i originally approached all shades of yellow
thinking of you
tongue tied
words caught between my lips like a fish hook
fumbling
still so wet
so slick
salivation
you look like comfort and taste like home
my brew net
intoxicating
you've captured
my heart
even with legs it could not run
the eyes would have it
or hips
you against mine
me parting your sea
or lips
spelling fascination with a grin
i am in
love
sensually brown
thinking of you
tongue tied
words caught between my lips like a fish hook
fumbling
still so wet
so slick
salivation
you look like comfort and taste like home
my brew net
intoxicating
you've captured
my heart
even with legs it could not run
the eyes would have it
or hips
you against mine
me parting your sea
or lips
spelling fascination with a grin
i am in
love
sensually brown
Published 9th Nov 2009
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9th Nov 2009 8:38am
Adore your way with words! Sensual & tantalizing. Your writing seems so familiar.. are you a memeber of any other poetry sites?
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9th Nov 2009 11:20am
i love that expression "words caught like fish hook".there is such beauty in this one.
9th Nov 2009 9:13pm
9th Nov 2009 9:23pm
i appreciate you taking time to read. it is the first poem I've written in a long time. this is the only site im on. its pretty awesome. thanks again.
1st Dec 2009 9:37pm
we both know what your words do to me, and yet this shocks me... i see a different side, and still the side i know... i truly love, must be a lucky one of whom you speak*smile*
