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-Progression-
What Once Was
Vibrant
Beautiful
Vivacious
and
Bold
Is Now
Rotting
Decaying
and
Covered
In Mold
-M
Published 3rd Jan 2015
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3rd Jan 2015 7:26am
Oh wow this is rather dark. Or at least saddening . Giving a sad tone to it, from a beautiful past. I love the details in it. Using words such as mold and decaying I think were good choices. :D
Anonymous
3rd Jan 2015 12:23pm
Interesting ink..may I ask what the "what" was?
3rd Jan 2015 8:29pm
Great question... When I wrote this I viewed the 'What' as- my life, my dreams, my aspirations, and the love I once had.
Anonymous
- Edited 3rd Jan 2015 8:40pm
3rd Jan 2015 8:39pm
That is so sad..uncover them my sweet friend, they are wasted under mold
4th Jan 2015 11:19pm
