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True colors
There I was
standing alone
against the storm
With clouds pouring fire
Gazing into the inferno
drenched in gasoline
As I looked to my side
I saw the swords and shields of my brothers
laying abandoned
Cast aside
Like the love I offered them
standing alone
against the storm
With clouds pouring fire
Gazing into the inferno
drenched in gasoline
As I looked to my side
I saw the swords and shields of my brothers
laying abandoned
Cast aside
Like the love I offered them
Published 30th Dec 2014
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30th Dec 2014 6:16am
This reminds me of a battle scene ... Perhaps the remnant thoughts of a U S Marine in the Middle East ...
Or a child solider in Rwanda. The fact that it could be universal makes it powerful.
Or a child solider in Rwanda. The fact that it could be universal makes it powerful.
30th Dec 2014 11:01am
Anonymous
14th Jan 2015 9:42pm
Brilliant write.. Like your delivery.. And imagery..
Dave
Dave
27th Jan 2015 9:07pm
Amaze ing work and it seems like life as in we re soldiers on the battlefield of life
28th May 2016 2:27am
