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Outside I find that the day has chafed my illusion with unwillingness
charmed within a hour of hours lost out in a mourning of various kinds
I chased along the will too bleed out what my death seemed to change in the
eyes of my god
My fashion strung along the shrill of cries where angels set too suite a hinge
of control near a Vatican cross of creations demons fit in a attire of wicked voices calmed in a gross of a stigmata I shoved inside a beautifupassing of
Floundering wings I peeled from my shoulders , as an offering unto my knowledge of kings dreaming of Hades
Dare that i say I am more then beauty, I may beastly change into a fly long
into a bed of blood I offer unto the god I prayed beneath challenging the heavens and hells to realease the books of Judas , forsaken that the outside
may reign as I stand in the death of my illusion
charmed within a hour of hours lost out in a mourning of various kinds
I chased along the will too bleed out what my death seemed to change in the
eyes of my god
My fashion strung along the shrill of cries where angels set too suite a hinge
of control near a Vatican cross of creations demons fit in a attire of wicked voices calmed in a gross of a stigmata I shoved inside a beautifupassing of
Floundering wings I peeled from my shoulders , as an offering unto my knowledge of kings dreaming of Hades
Dare that i say I am more then beauty, I may beastly change into a fly long
into a bed of blood I offer unto the god I prayed beneath challenging the heavens and hells to realease the books of Judas , forsaken that the outside
may reign as I stand in the death of my illusion
Published 30th Dec 2014
| Edited 7th Apr 2015
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You are thrilling. I could not stop reading any one of them over again. Your poetry is divine for me to read; the undertones and passion is rip-roaring amazement, and fulfilling. I started picking favorites (the toll of demise, ms murder) but by the time I got to the end I just couldn’t pick, but I added a few to my reading list in hopes that others will see them. Your writing – the style & mind gear is as significant as literature & poetry itself. The words that you use fall natural and not found as to make look like something. I am in awe of your work, and it makes me ashamed of some of the petty things I've been stuck on lately. I know not the story, but your writing is pure madness, inspirational, and has restored my faith in poems. I’ll shut up before I start yelling bravo. There are writing errors in simple mistakes, and if you ever need any help editing or want a list of them poem to poem – just let me know, I am glad to help. William Blake is one of my favorites too, and I was wondering if you had read, The Four Zoas. Besides your own mind in where you've been and the societal influence on you as the environment, he looks looks like he's been a great inspiration for you.
7th Apr 2015 10:38pm
Aww thank you,I've not long started this page,the other eatfat is my page also,,thanks for the constructive observation,I rarely correct my work
Because I just write and my not read for years,,but with that being I would be obliged with asking for the help,thank you again,stay awesome!!
Because I just write and my not read for years,,but with that being I would be obliged with asking for the help,thank you again,stay awesome!!
