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Just Once More

She lit aflame
Dance floor command
Latin as Spain
 
Red flowing dress
High sculpted legs
Consuming all attention

Struck up conversation
Sparked at once
Humor her weakness
 
Lips, hands flow
Dress and shirt
Together on floor

Recounting our events
We smile knowing
Sharing this afterglow

Tomorrow is calling
Our tryst ending
Meaning likely forever

Sheets weep discarded
Sultry phoenix rising
The bed mourns 

Collecting her effects
Nightstand altar artifacts
Earrings, necklace, purse
 
Dress now on
Shoes and thong
Smiling, waves goodbye

Say something, anything!
What was it?
Here goes nothing:

“No vayas todavia!”
My words hit
React like gasoline 

Something ignites inside
Volatile as dynamite
She spins ablaze
 
Eyes brown fire
Send the challenge
Fucked, not conquered

Fingertips slip disrobe  
Dying fire dress
Collapsing after steps

Cat-like presence
Wants me wanting
Slow approach suspense
 
Grace in spades
Pose moving statuesque
Glide confident stride
 
Climbing bed stalking
Prey hunter hypnotizing
Overwhelming silent power

Eyes meet speaking
Heat lightning glint
Class is in

Lips fire furious
Burning dance begins
Swallowing her taste

Hungers striking flint
Fingers biting grip
Clawing for connection

Education now begins
Fervid mistress mounts
Ensuring full retention
 
Erratic active vent
Igneous cock monolith
Taken deep within
 
Rocking shockwave rhythm
Scalding caramel skin
Tremors pressure building

Fingernails dig in
White hot tension
Rapid, shallow breathing
 
Proving grounds condemn
Burn, Thrust, Combustion
Claim fading, shaking

I have lost
I am hers
Her point taken

Belonging to none,
Stallion Queen dismounts
Tresses swallow shoulders
 
Rapid shallow breathing
Shaking, still contracting
Playful eyes batting
 
Her perfume lingers
Her touch too
“Buenos Noches, Amante.”

[I offered a three word challenge to Jestalessa and thought i'd get in it too.  We both agreed that it came out on the long side (that's how I roll) and she gave me a brilliant edit of it.  But I just couldn't part with some of the fluff.  So here it is in its original form]
Written by PierreTheMad
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