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Free Fall
Falling, falling
free-falling...
The gorges, the rapids
the headwinds,
The phone calls, the arguments,
the apologies.
Each moment: Flash frame after
flash frame after flash frame
rushing toward infinity...
It was too much too fast!
Then somethig jerks you.
Everything stops. The world
freezes in an instant.
You stop
You open your eyes
You stand up
You breathe,
and you feel your feet still on the ground.
free-falling...
The gorges, the rapids
the headwinds,
The phone calls, the arguments,
the apologies.
Each moment: Flash frame after
flash frame after flash frame
rushing toward infinity...
It was too much too fast!
Then somethig jerks you.
Everything stops. The world
freezes in an instant.
You stop
You open your eyes
You stand up
You breathe,
and you feel your feet still on the ground.
Published 23rd Dec 2014
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24th Dec 2014 1:42am
Ahh, too much too fast feel n those limby jerks, could feel the topgeared gush n then back. dreamlike, this piece.
24th Dec 2014 3:38pm
24th Dec 2014 1:11pm
I know that rush i love it, it is like the torrent of a raging river that want to carry you along into a free fall a place of sweet abandoned bliss.
24th Dec 2014 3:38pm
28th Dec 2014 12:51pm
a swish of wishes, (mostly
unrequited),
then
it's done....
bravo basso!
28th Dec 2014 4:06pm
