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The Cowards Addiction
You are cocaine and heroine
that tore my insides
But I loved the addiction
so I let you reside
I lost all of me
in your delicious drug
and drank you down
pretentious love
Traced invisible lines
accross your lips
and accepted your lies
and your sinful abyss
You sunk your teeth
into my welcoming flesh
and fed on my lust
until no longer fresh
You pulled me inside of you
again and again
screaming in rapture
and loving the sin
Our bodies combined
indulgence delivered
feeling the passion
as you shook and shivered
Hours of carnage
the pleasure and pain
ignoring your sorrow
as you came and came again
This tryst of lovers
too many times endured
staining your covers
with lies assured
A kiss of poison
and a smile so sharp
as we seperate
into the dark
No goodbyes
no names to be spoken
and our hearts are safe...
unbroken.
that tore my insides
But I loved the addiction
so I let you reside
I lost all of me
in your delicious drug
and drank you down
pretentious love
Traced invisible lines
accross your lips
and accepted your lies
and your sinful abyss
You sunk your teeth
into my welcoming flesh
and fed on my lust
until no longer fresh
You pulled me inside of you
again and again
screaming in rapture
and loving the sin
Our bodies combined
indulgence delivered
feeling the passion
as you shook and shivered
Hours of carnage
the pleasure and pain
ignoring your sorrow
as you came and came again
This tryst of lovers
too many times endured
staining your covers
with lies assured
A kiss of poison
and a smile so sharp
as we seperate
into the dark
No goodbyes
no names to be spoken
and our hearts are safe...
unbroken.
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The Coward's Addiction.
1st May 2011 7:37pm
re: The Coward's Addiction.
1st May 2011 9:51pm
Thank you, its one of my favorites because of how much of me and "her" is in it.
re: jeez
1st May 2011 11:32pm
Thanks gorgeous! Its always nice to hear that something I wrote is liked by someone else...I am my own worst critic!
Deep
1st May 2011 11:46pm
re: Deep
2nd May 2011 4:47am
Thank you very much, I am proud for the most part but not at the words as much as the experiences, the pain, and lessons learned and ignored!
Kudos
28th Jun 2011 00:06am
Love it!!!
23rd Jan 2012 7:47am
I really love this poem!!!
You are an amazing writer :)
Keep up the good work ModestMediocrity!!!! <3
You are an amazing writer :)
Keep up the good work ModestMediocrity!!!! <3
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re: Love it!!!
28th Feb 2012 5:07am
Thanks so much! I'm hardly on here anymore and have written hundreds since, just too lazy to post them I suppose, thank you for the comments though, always appreciated...this is one of my all time favorite pieces
wow
Anonymous
5th Mar 2012 6:25am
that was hot...
"You pulled me inside of you
again and again
screaming in rapture
and loving the sin"
That was my favorite but each verse so seductively describes this lustful addiction...Great Write :)
"You pulled me inside of you
again and again
screaming in rapture
and loving the sin"
That was my favorite but each verse so seductively describes this lustful addiction...Great Write :)
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re: wow
5th Mar 2012 6:33am
Thanks so very much, a compliment from you on my eroticism is a compliment I am proud to receive! x x
re: re: wow
Anonymous
5th Mar 2012 6:40am
well Thank You... but it is your work you should be proud of ;)I look forward to more erotic writes from you
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Ahh!
9th Mar 2012 11:43pm
I didn't think it would be erotic! (I'm kinda churchy) XD But it was quite incredible.. Clearly alot of work went into this, much more than the scrawl I scratch down in biology to stay awake. You have found a marvelous way to pour your heart & soul out into a poem.<3 If I could do that, I'd probably pee my pants..
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re: Ahh!
10th Mar 2012 00:25am
:) You're funny...I hope it didn't offend your "churchy" ears! It really isn't meant to be viewed as erotic, albeit that's how most people view it. It's meant to express the desperate sadness of the "tryst" or "one-night stand," the cowardice involved in being to broken to trust or to love. Thanks for the comments though, hopefully you don't become that kind of writer, pants could get pretty expensive! :)
re: re: Ahh!
10th Mar 2012 00:31am
Well, I'm sure I'd just wash them? XD and no, my churchy ears have heard far worse.. this was a sweet poem, but sad, too..<3
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re: re: re: Ahh!
10th Mar 2012 00:46am
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25th Apr 2012 7:29pm
Thank you so much, I have been soooo busy lately I haven't had much time to write but I'm glad to know these older poems still gain attention. :)