It's time for ... - Senryu

Oh yes, hearts will have to wait  
a little longer to get dusted :-).  
But there might already be spring in somebody's head ...
Thanks, dear Gabriel :-).

oh, tomorrow will do,
put your feet up and leave
the dust where it is, or  perhaps
write a message in it with
your finger, something like
'hands off'..:)

Oh, really, love your imagination! That I could do, write a message in the dust. At least a short message:-). 'Hands off' is quite good :-). Or 'Staff only' :-).

I read it as sweet and humble. Refreshing.  Although Paul's got a splendid idea in putting the feet up, and dirty fingers and things like that. :)  You do such a great job.

Thanks a lot, dear Pish. Paul's comments are always sharp and witty, I love them :-). And yours as well since you always consider your comments thoroughly which I highly appreciate. You are right, it was written as 'sweet and humble' and I'm glad that it also can be interpreted in different ways. That's what haiku are for :-).

Love me tender,love me sweet,never let me go.

Don't we all want to be loved, give away our hearts, receive one? You nailed it, Hashman :-).

I think cute and quirky for the conclusion
And "Heart covered in dust" alone is deep and felt kinda lonely/dormant.
Well done!!!
I've probably misinterpreted all...lol.

No, you haven't, Sadsmiles. We create our poems with a certain intention and meaning and are suprised what other people see in them. That's interesting and enriching. Thank you so much for your thoughtful words!

It's been a long time since I've been able to read your writing and may I say it is as wonderful as I remember :).

Good to see you again, Sara! Worried a bit what might have prevented you from writing :-). Thanks for your kind comment!