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A Passionate Red

*Fair Warning, This Short Story Contains Graphic Sexual Content AND Some Violence*

Ahh...it was a beautiful Thursday evening. The breeze was blowing, not a cloud in the sky, and every star you laid your eyes on seemed somehow more beautiful than the one before it. Truly a night worth romancing, at least those were the thoughts of Janice and Tom, a young couple who's anniversary just happened to be on this night. Little did they know that this night would be one for remembrance.

The two of them stood right outside the door to their home, kissing and fondling in the pale moonlight, preparing for the remnants of the evening. A breeze blew by and as it did Janice moaned lightly, it lifted her yellow sundress slightly and as the wind caressed her she got goosebumps...since the undergarments she wore...were left in the car..

Janice began to wrap her right leg around Tom. After her leg was locked in place, she started to gyrate her hips slowly. Tom of course, was feeling her intentions. "Honey, we should go inside, I don't want everyone else to see us." Tom said. Janice replied, "Let them look, all they will see is the truth baby". "Still, I think it would be best if we went inside.." said Tom. "Ah Tom, are you afraid of a little fun?" Tom replied in confidence, "No! the real fun starts inside babe..trust me". "Haha, ok baby..but if you start getting boring on me I am gonna have to take charge again.." said Janice. "Well then, quit stalling and get your ass inside!" Tom said loudly, with a playful tone. Janice finished unlocking the door and chuckled as she walked in.

At that moment, a man dressed in black from head to toe wearing a black ski mask came abruptly from behind them and shoved them into the home and slammed the door. He had been hiding on the side of the home waiting for them to open the door. Once inside he pulled out a gun, pointed it at Janice and said "Get down on the ground bitch, and make it quick". Janice complied immediately. The scary part was not just the fact that she had a gun pointed at her, but the way he said it. He sounded as if he had no emotion. His voice was monotone, and just hearing it gave her the chills.

He then pointed the gun at Tom, "I would not try anything hero, unless of course, you want a bullet in the head?" The man said very coldly. Then Tom replied "No, but please just take what you want and leave me and my wife in peace!" "Perfect" The man said, and hit Tom in the back of the neck with the handle of the gun. Tom fell to the floor like a sack of potatoes, and Janice let loose a muffled scream...but the man seemed to have no patience for screaming. So he took off his belt, then slapped it on his hand as he approached Janice with vicious intent..

The man slapped both sides of the wooden floor next to Janice, and as he did, she scooted further and further back while laying sideways on the ground. As he got closer, his boot slipped on a small puddle on the wooden floor, that to him, looked like a trail of bodily fluids leading right back to Janice. "Ahh, what a nice view" he said, as her dress lifted slightly.."do you greet all of your guests like this? I think I am flattered."

As he said that, he smacked the floor again...and again..she scooted further back till she couldn't anymore. He then inspected her further with his gun and said "My my, look at you already this excited and I have not even done anything yet..heh". "No! No! its not what you think!" Janice exclaimed in nervousness. "And how would you know what I am thinking? Hmm princess? You know what I think? I Think me and you are gonna have a lot of fun, and I think it is gonna be one hell of a night".

The man began to slightly chuckle as he said "Take it off..." Janice crept her shaking hands up to her shoulders slowly...reluctantly. "NOW!" he demanded. Her hands slipped quickly to the back of her neck and loosened the straps that held her dress on. She then got up and slid the dress down to her ankles and shook the dress off of her feet. The man took a few short..Loud steps toward Janice and pulled out a switch blade from one of the pockets and clicked it open. He then slid the knife very lightly across Janice's skin, up to the center of her bra, and with a quick motion, cut the bra off. Janice then stood there with hands crossed over her private areas. The man took a few steps back and said "Come here" his voice seemed slightly different, as if he were entering a state of arousal. His tone seemed more labored, and became slightly deeper...as he drew pleasure from his sadistic actions.

Janice approached slowly, and right as she got near the man, he grabbed her by her shoulders and pulled her closer. He was enticed by her aroma...moving the knife close to her face. "I love the smell of fear" he whispered, as he began to lightly sniff around Janice's neck and shoulders. Without warning, he forced her on to her knees, putting the knife near her face... pulling her hair back so he could look into her eyes.."Suck it" he demanded. Janice looked at the buttons on the man's pants, then turned her head to the side, as to deny his order. The man then looked in her eyes and smiled.."So we are gonna play this game are we?" he said with a sadistic chuckle that followed.

His smile was gone quicker than it came, and out of nowhere came a loud "Slap!" Before Janice's face could finish turning from the force of the slap, he had already gripped her hair again and said.."Now we are gonna try this again." He then pulled out his gun and shot a bullet off in Tom's direction. "No no no, please! I will do anything, just please don't hurt Tom!" Janice pleaded.. "Ahh, that's the spirit...by the way, my next shots will not miss" the man said as he unbuttoned his pants. Janice then leaned in closer to him, and pulled out the man's penis, and from the recent events, the man was already fully erect..

Janice began to slowly lick the bottom of the shaft, and worked her way to the tip..and as she put her mouth over it, the man forced it inside her mouth. He began to thrust it all the way down her throat, forcefully. Her eyes tearing up out of sheer reflex, she began to slightly gag from his thick...hot...throbbing cock. "Ahhh...no vomit, that is a good girl" the man said as he continued to pump and grind into her mouth without mercy. He then began to pull it out and put it back in, slapping the tip of his engorged penis on her lips...Then returning to his forceful pace. He then began lightly slapping her on the side of her face as she sucked on him.. at that moment, you could hear her muffled moans getting louder as Janice climaxed.

"Naughty girl, did I give you permission to cum?" the man said. He then pulled it out of her mouth, took off his coat, grabbing a condom out of one of the pockets, then tossing the coat onto the table. He threw it onto Janice's lap and said "you know what to do". She opened the condom and rolled it on to his twitching penis. He then picked her up by the hair and forced her to bend over on the table.."Now the fun begins" he whispered into her ear as he kicked her legs open and stuck his throbbing erection into her moist, warm, eager vagina.

"No No, Nooo!" Janice pleaded, but it was too late...he was already inside of her. He began to pump and grind very slowly, yet very deeply. After a short time, he shifted to a very fast pace. Grunting and moaning, slapping and gasping...these were the instruments played in this symphony of lust. He then grabbed his belt off of the table and began smacking it on Janice's ass, as he continued to violate her with vicious authority. Janice could not take it anymore and her juices began to flow down and around her legs.

Now he could hear the sound of Janice's moans more clearly and this brought a smile to the man's face. He then took his belt and wrapped it around her mouth from behind and tugged on it. Holding his belt, and pulling with one hand, he used the other to press down on her lower back. At this point, Janice was pinching one of her nipples, while moving her lower half up and down, keeping up with the rhythm of his thrust. But just as Janice was going to climax again, the man pulled it out and said "Nah, you are much better from this end" and as an exhausted Janice slipped down to her knees, he started on her mouth again...

Janice's body, now limp and worn down, just sat there as he had his way. Around this time, she felt someone playing with her other end...and as she tried to look back, the man redirected her face to the task at hand. She then heard a familiar voice say "Hmm, seems this hole is already dirty...I will just have to use the other one." Janice's eyes then opened widely as she realized that it was Tom who said it!...And she knew what he meant...

Tom began rubbing his cock in her juices. When he felt it had enough lubrication, he eased it into her ass, and began moving somewhat slowly. Janice's expression changed from a startled look, to full blown ecstatic. Tom now began roughly smacking her ass, turning it to a bright pink color. He began going faster and faster...and as he did her breasts and ass began to bounce more and more rapidly. Tom reached down and began to finger Janice with two fingers and soon after, she climaxed yet again. At the pace he was going, Tom soon followed, and climaxed within her. The other man however...did not climax, and just removed his cock from her throat..

Afterwards, Janice just laid against the wall...panting and sweaty...with saliva running down the side of her lip. Tom then looked at her while buttoning his pants and asked excitedly..."So what did you think honey? Did you enjoy it?" She then turned her head loosely towards Tom, and with an out of breath voice she said..."Oh yea..it was incredible". The other man zipped up his pants and stood there as if he was expecting something.

Tom then turned to him with a big smile on his face and said "Man you guys are great! We should call for your services more often! Sooo..how much do I owe you?" "$1350.00" he replied..."Okay, so do you guys take checks?"... "No" the man stated firmly with a cold tone. Tom's face then turned white as he raised his sight from his wallet, and stared down the barrel of a silencer. The man then pulled the trigger, and shot Tom right in the middle of his forehead, and Tom collapsed on to the couch.

Unknowing, since she had her back turned, and still recovering from the recent events, Janice continued on with her praises about the man's performance. The man walked up behind her and took in the fragrance of Janice's hair. He then pulled back with a look of dissatisfaction. Janice then ended her praises with "Well, I guess everyone got what they wanted tonight". "That is one way of looking at it.." the man said, as he then shot Janice in the back of the head.

Afterward, he put on his jacket and went over to a computer tower, turned it on and began "cleaning up". When he was done he went to the fridge and grabbed a soda. A short while later, the man left the home whistling as he walked towards a beat up compact car. He drove about a mile away and while at a stoplight, he noticed a flickering light in an alleyway. There were no other cars on the road so he backed up and parked in a parking lot near the alleyway.

When he got there, a homeless man was standing near a trash can that had a blazing fire burning in it. The man then walked up near the flame, and stared at it with a stone cold glare, as if he welcomed it. "It sho is cold out tonight in'it?" the homeless man said. The man replied "you have no idea.." then shot the homeless man in the head. Afterward he threw his clothes in the fire and the homeless man's corpse along with it...He chuckled and walked away whistling with a smirk on his face as he had wore a pizza delivery suit underneath the black clothes he used as a guise, in his twisted and sadistic idea of fun.

The police found 3 bodies in the area of the home. One of the bodies was the Actual man that was meant to be hired by Janice and Tom...for their attempt at "sexual exploration". Of course the other two were Tom and Janice themselves. Their bodies were sat along side each other on the couch, holding each other. The only thing the police had to go on was a verse that was typed on Tom and Janice's computer. It just read simply:

"In each others arms..these lovers lay
with not a worry, nor a fear..
Their dreams no longer led astray
for their fates have brought them here.
They now lay here truly together..
and so together they have bled..
in the hands of time, on the lips of forever..
They will dream of a passionate red."


The man was never found, and continues on his spree of treachery and murder. From Policeman, to Bell boy. From Fireman, to Cashier, he can be anyone...anywhere. So just remember that in this world of lies, there is one saying that remains true and that is that "Safety is an Illusion..."
Written by Benaditus (Robert)
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