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Today I Only want The Pleasure!
It's My Turn to Get!
Generally I take the initiative,
To suck n fuck you,
So, it was great that your passion's flame burnt/
On that special night you gave me multiple orgasm;
By finger fucking my cunt!
I still feel that shiver n tremble,
Inside my pussy & on my clit/
I wish to offer you a shaved pussy next time,
So that your tongue-tip can give me a royal treat!
That night I was selfish And
Sometimes it's better to get only/
Do You regret baby that
I didn't fuck you that night, like regularly!
I still can hear my trembled moan,
And I wanted to be fucked by you so badly/
Next is your turn, so shave your pubic hairs,
I don't want any obstacles when soon I'll make love to you; Madly!
Generally I take the initiative,
To suck n fuck you,
So, it was great that your passion's flame burnt/
On that special night you gave me multiple orgasm;
By finger fucking my cunt!
I still feel that shiver n tremble,
Inside my pussy & on my clit/
I wish to offer you a shaved pussy next time,
So that your tongue-tip can give me a royal treat!
That night I was selfish And
Sometimes it's better to get only/
Do You regret baby that
I didn't fuck you that night, like regularly!
I still can hear my trembled moan,
And I wanted to be fucked by you so badly/
Next is your turn, so shave your pubic hairs,
I don't want any obstacles when soon I'll make love to you; Madly!
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Re: Today I Only want The Pleasure!
24th Feb 2015 00:30am
You are clear about what you want. No holding back. The writing is precise. I like it
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re: Re: Today I Only want The Pleasure!
25th Feb 2015 5:16am
And I too like the crystal clear way of your appreciation. Thank You Siraj.
Re: Today I Only want The Pleasure!
24th Feb 2015 2:29pm
Mmmmmm I'm a fan of giving pleasure
N I'd eat all night with the utmost joy. :)
N I'd eat all night with the utmost joy. :)
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re: Re: Today I Only want The Pleasure!
25th Feb 2015 5:08am
It's just a poem. For reality I've my fiancé to quench my thirst. So thanks for what you meant...but No Thanks.
Re: Today I Only want The Pleasure!
25th Feb 2015 4:01am
This is white hot eroticism!!! The words arouse me as I read. You play out the scene with delicious words. I love how this made me feel as I read. You are so good at erotica. I loved it. ;-)
John
John
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re: Re: Today I Only want The Pleasure!
25th Feb 2015 5:14am
Hi John,
I love erotica. Thanks you liked it. Soon I might post another extreme content I guess as I'm obsessed with erotica. I'm glad you called it white erotica. The word sounds nice. (Perhaps you wanted to mean quite hot erotica! But white erotica sounded funny new word with meaning to me. So thanks to the typos) 😉 And thanks for being at my every post to motivate me.
Regards,
Erotica Lover
I love erotica. Thanks you liked it. Soon I might post another extreme content I guess as I'm obsessed with erotica. I'm glad you called it white erotica. The word sounds nice. (Perhaps you wanted to mean quite hot erotica! But white erotica sounded funny new word with meaning to me. So thanks to the typos) 😉 And thanks for being at my every post to motivate me.
Regards,
Erotica Lover
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25th Feb 2015 5:28am
I'm so happy my comments motivate you to write more. I am very glad to get to read your hot lyrics. White Hot means extremely hot. It is one of most hot flames. And your verse is very invigorating for my libido. For that i am most grateful to you. Keep writing my friend and I will keep reading. :)
Your devoted reader,
John
Your devoted reader,
John
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25th Feb 2015 5:36am
Thank you my naughty boy! 😉 May be someday I'll dedicate a poem only for my "devoted reader"! Who knows! 😃😄
Re: Today I Only want The Pleasure!
25th Feb 2015 4:55am
Love how you put it on the table!!
Great ink sweets!!
Pleasure too read!!!
Sir Lancelott
Great ink sweets!!
Pleasure too read!!!
Sir Lancelott
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re: Re: Today I Only want The Pleasure!
25th Feb 2015 5:06am
Thank you again Sir. I started respecting you. I love to write erotic poems, but for a change I want to try other themes also. You want me to write on any other particular topic Sir Lancelott? ☺
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25th Feb 2015 5:13am
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25th Feb 2015 6:33am
"I wish to offer you a shaved pussy next time,
So that your tongue-tip can give me a royal treat!"
Mind blowing .... well thought
So that your tongue-tip can give me a royal treat!"
Mind blowing .... well thought
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Re: Today I Only want The Pleasure!
25th Feb 2015 1:45pm