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maybe we are meant to be
Im not the prettiest
Im not the best ever
Im not the nicest
And im not so clever
Im a bitch
I'll be cocky forever
Im talkative
And you can do better
But you know i have your back
Im always there for you
Im not perfect
Theres fish in the sea, but its now missing two
Youre sarcastic
And youre so quiet
You go out to play tenniss
And if you want it you buy it
Yet you always have my back
And for some reason you choose me
You and i are not perfect
But maybe, we are meant to be
Im not the best ever
Im not the nicest
And im not so clever
Im a bitch
I'll be cocky forever
Im talkative
And you can do better
But you know i have your back
Im always there for you
Im not perfect
Theres fish in the sea, but its now missing two
Youre sarcastic
And youre so quiet
You go out to play tenniss
And if you want it you buy it
Yet you always have my back
And for some reason you choose me
You and i are not perfect
But maybe, we are meant to be
Published 23rd Nov 2014
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23rd Nov 2014 11:46pm
23rd Nov 2014 11:56pm
24th Nov 2014 00:50am
I really like how honest you are about you and this one guy, it just makes it that more real and relatable :D, love it.
24th Nov 2014 1:57am
26th Nov 2014 10:53pm
Doesn't it change your life when we can say FUCK THE BULLSHIT and just be honest about who we are? ME? I'm an ego-maniacal, self serving prick. But I have love in my heart. The freedom to just say "I don't care about what I have become, because I'm amazing" is truly liberating. You're a cocky bitch, but you know what? Someone loves that about you. SO how can that be wrong?
27th Nov 2014 2:34am
Hell yes, i literally love you right now!!
And yes, im a cocky, no filter, talkative bitch, but im also a lover who would go to the end of the world if i love you
And yes, im a cocky, no filter, talkative bitch, but im also a lover who would go to the end of the world if i love you
6th Dec 2014 1:08am
I liked it. Although you have two stanzas about you, then one of the both of y'all and one about your partner and then another of the two of you. I feel as though you could make it more symmetrical and add and add another stanza about your partner. Have it be you, you, both, them, them, both. But that is my personal opinion. Other than that... Its a great write!
Pen on,
Jaimee-Leigh
Pen on,
Jaimee-Leigh
6th Dec 2014 2:37am
