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I Love You..

� � � � � � � � � We're in the back of your Jeep.
� � � � � � � � � Talking at the park.
� � � � � � � � � Wishing we could lay down & sleep.
� � � � � � � � � ...I felt the spark in my heart.

� � � � � � � � � Kiss after kiss.
� � � � � � � � � Our lips fit perfectly.
� � � � � � � � � I can feel the anarchy inside me.
� � � � � � � � � Should I say what I feel?

� � � � � � � � � As I look into your eyes,
� � � � � � � � � it comes out as a surprise.
� � � � � � � � � I still remember the first
� � � � � � � � � time I said "I love you..."
� � � � � � � � � Thinking "oh please say it back."

� � � � � � � � � I felt so hesitant,
� � � � � � � � � but when you said it back...
� � � � � � � � � it felt so pleasant.

� � � � � � � � � You stared through the
� � � � � � � � � windows of my soul &
� � � � � � � � � you said it back,
� � � � � � � � � followed by the softest
� � � � � � � � � kiss you ever gave me...

I Love You...

Written by naathalie___

(moongirl)

Published 20th Nov 2014

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Re: I Love You..

Anonymous

20th Nov 2014 8:17pm

Great write..

Dave

Re: I Love You..

Poetryman

20th Nov 2014 8:49pm

Very sweet. Something to remember, the first time you say "I love you" to someone should never be in the grip of passionate feelings. Passionate feelings can burn out in the blink of an eye. It then becomes reactionary to say "I love you too". Too late to go back now, but if it doesn't last forever, let the first time be when you are not sharing a kiss or other passionate embrace. Allow love to stand on its own so it is the only feeling happening and then savor the kiss that follows...
JJ