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Beauty Destroyed
The words spoken kills me the most
The horrid words
Said by him
Said by me
Then taken and almost created in reality
So close to
So very close then she came...
The words,
Such words destroyed
such actions destroyed
such beautiful words
such beautiful actions
Gone forever more
And now forgotten by all
All except me
But my yearning heart
my broken, distrot, yearning heart
The horrid words
Said by him
Said by me
Then taken and almost created in reality
So close to
So very close then she came...
The words,
Such words destroyed
such actions destroyed
such beautiful words
such beautiful actions
Gone forever more
And now forgotten by all
All except me
But my yearning heart
my broken, distrot, yearning heart
Published 25th Apr 2011
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26th Apr 2011 1:44am
26th Apr 2011 9:47pm
thank you i appreciate that... and you are the first to comment as well
27th Apr 2011 1:56am
27th Apr 2011 9:01pm
1st May 2011 5:57pm
It's different than most stuff I read. I really like it. It has a certain.......charm that really stands out.
1st May 2011 6:02pm
20th Jun 2011 6:27pm
i love it cuz i know how that feels and its not fun and the wording is just ammazing great work
20th Jun 2011 6:30pm
Anonymous
27th Jul 2011 8:05pm
This is beautiful.
28th Jul 2011 2:44pm
28th Jul 2011 4:28pm
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25th Aug 2011 11:09pm
i really like ur approach 2 dis....afta readn so many selections like dis its astonishing dat so many ppl stil go thru such heartache...lol
25th Aug 2011 11:44pm
Anonymous
13th Dec 2011 3:15am
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this is pretty sick (translation- I liked this), but you misspelled distraught. And, you don't need the space between 'forever' and 'more'.. It could simply be put 'forevermore.'
16th Mar 2012 3:02pm
16th Mar 2012 3:04pm
Well um..you've read it before:P...and well I'll tell you via message
