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a detective novel...
he took the book back
to the shop, saying that the last
page had been ripped out...
how do I know that
you didn't do it, said the man
behind the counter...
we'll never know who
did it, he said, not with the
last page missing...
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19th Nov 2014 4:13am
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Re: a detective novel...(three haiku)
19th Nov 2014 6:59am
I should think that you did it. Great poem detective.
I found a movie recently. Longer than most, but I sat through more than 4 hours of it, almost 5. The last scene was cut off. no kidding. I felt so used and empty.
I found a movie recently. Longer than most, but I sat through more than 4 hours of it, almost 5. The last scene was cut off. no kidding. I felt so used and empty.
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Anonymous
29th Nov 2014 00:05am
My god man, have read a few of yours this morning, and I'm hooked ... love it!

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re: Re: a detective novel...
29th Nov 2014 00:24am
oh thanks, I'm really
glad you're hooked,
not that I'm fishing
for compliments..:)
glad you're hooked,
not that I'm fishing
for compliments..:)
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