i am a vampire

Has to be my favorite lines ever!

so......
fuck you all!
shit i really do have a temper!
(but at least im not a sissy sparkly vampire like the twilight ones!)

Kickass!

thanks- i fuckin hate twilight it's a disgrace  to all vampires that don't sparkle

beutifully written

thank you very much!

i liked it XD meeh teacher called me a vampire O_o

no i think a vampire wudnt be as spiteful....

hurtful much?

well you know how i roll sweetie!

I really like this poem.. kinda reminds me of the other day at my school:

at school i have a study class, theres only a handfull of students and we just chill in a classroom and wait for the bell so we can leave.

i had no work to do so i tried to take a nap... my god i couldnt sleep! everyone was eyeballing me!
i was laying out of the sun coz my body heats up when i sleep and i had my arms crossed over my chest and my legs dead straight.

but then i cant blame them for staring, i was wearing black leather boots, black stockings, a black skirt and white button up top (school uniform), a black thin jacket and to top it off i have red hair (not orange, red.. i died it this way) and i keep out of the sun so im a little white...

i could hear them whispering things about me.. i have better hearing then they think..
one girl said i looked like a vamp... shame...
lol

haha same here people think im a vamp

Are vampires also allergic to writing good poetry? If so, yes, you are a vampire. See, the words somewhat make sense, it's just the way they are put together that makes this boring. It's not a poem, really. Rather just a list of crap.

hahaha how you make me laugh(sarcasm) i must have you know us goths can write decent poetry its just some trendies cant understand it unless its in their language- trust me im being nice if i wasnt in such a good mood i would say worse things anyway im not bothered what you think because other people seem to like it!

I was under the impression poetry was supposed to have some sort of structure to it.  You know, some kind of form, something that MAKES it a poem.  This was in no way artistic, it sounded more like a journal entry from some trendy little girl who wants soooo desperately to be something bad ass.  There's nothing bad ass about a vampire.  They can't go into the sun, they drink blood, which opens them up to a whole host of diseases, they can't even get erections because their hearts aren't beating, and if your heart isn't beating the blood can't rush to that part of your body, which is what an erection IS, so no sex for vampires, thankfully that means they can't reproduce either, so at least there's a small upside to all of this.  Why would you want to be a pale, sickly, thin bloodsucker?  You know what else drinks blood?  Mosquitoes, leeches, lice, ticks...I could go on with the throng of parasites but I think you get the point.

for your information im not trendy thats rich coming from someone who is a trendy and no i dont want to be a vampire its just a poem so just grow up vampires aint badass i just wanted to write it as if i was a vampire and just caus your older than me doesnt mean you can push me around and tell me im some 'trendy little girl'

Can you try that again in coherent sentences?

and people call me childish your just wasting your time by commenting on this. But i dont give a good god damn!