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Falling

Sometimes falling asleep
I'm afraid I can crash
You just hold me, hold tight

Written by silvasomni

(silva)

Published 13th Nov 2014

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Re: Falling

13th Nov 2014 7:09pm

Short but really beautiful. You pack emotion and need into just a few simple words. Almost gives me vertigo.

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13th Nov 2014 7:24pm

Thank you, crowfly, I appreciate that...

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Re: Falling

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14th Nov 2014 1:06am

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14th Nov 2014 5:50am

Thank you so much, Gabriel.

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Re: Falling

14th Nov 2014 3:07pm

Great ink!

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14th Nov 2014 4:38pm

Thank you!

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