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unfettered
lite a ciggy,
vaporize your stress
consume the devils grog,
dissolve all diffidence
try a little reefer,
become one with relaxation
pop a pill or two,
to shake those dreary days
snort a line of this,
then a toke of that
no longer aroused,
slide this needle in your vein
pump in the concoction,
drift to distant realms
indulge in libidinous sex
with countless he's and she's...
say fuck the world
and do as you please
vaporize your stress
consume the devils grog,
dissolve all diffidence
try a little reefer,
become one with relaxation
pop a pill or two,
to shake those dreary days
snort a line of this,
then a toke of that
no longer aroused,
slide this needle in your vein
pump in the concoction,
drift to distant realms
indulge in libidinous sex
with countless he's and she's...
say fuck the world
and do as you please
Published 5th Nov 2009
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Anonymous
5th Nov 2009 6:57pm
The flow and structure of this are quite exquisite. Thought effortlessly translated into pure poetry. I do love it when meaning takes the form of professional verse. Brilliant. And the title's not bad either.
5th Nov 2009 7:32pm
5th Nov 2009 7:50pm
'I don't fully believe in criticism, more or less, for each individual is entitled to their own opinion, not to mention the fact that there are no boundaries that are not self-imposed..
I dig this a lot.
It quickly captures the dark murkiness of its subjects.
(I mean that positively speaking, it's well done)
J.G.
I dig this a lot.
It quickly captures the dark murkiness of its subjects.
(I mean that positively speaking, it's well done)
J.G.
5th Nov 2009 9:47pm
Anonymous
6th Nov 2009 12:01pm
in the right place, beautifully written, and deeply moving:-)love it
6th Nov 2009 5:32pm
6th Nov 2009 10:43pm
