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Hey Stupid
You’re in danger
so you might ought
to move your ass.
Author's notes:
file under Altruism;
dumb and dangerous.
so you might ought
to move your ass.
Author's notes:
file under Altruism;
dumb and dangerous.
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re: Re: Hey Stupid
5th Nov 2014 7:37am
Re: Hey Stupid
5th Nov 2014 1:49am
Re: Hey Stupid
Obviously, that's a warning in poetic form. You couldn't have said it nicer :-).
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re: Re: Hey Stupid
5th Nov 2014 7:36am
Miss Chi, thank you for your visit! Obviously is right, yet this has an air and depth that is unseen that comes from our ancestry and ecology. It's not well understood, and that's okay. (such as me) But I could never deny my sarcasm. I've learned to live with it, and use it with a sense of good grace and laughter. I try to anyway. I would never want you to believe that I ever call my children stupid, or anybody. I hate it when people think that they're stupid. It is a pet peeve of mine. But anyway, after raising three sons, I now have my own definition of an adolescent(or grown man) rationalization mastered perfectly: "I'm stupid and here's why." And see, then come the excuses. Sometimes being a sweetheart just isn't the answer. :) sorry I got off subject a little. thank you though.
Re: Hey Stupid
5th Nov 2014 11:52am
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6th Nov 2014 8:07pm
Re: Hey Stupid
6th Nov 2014 2:52am
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6th Nov 2014 8:03pm
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Damn, sweetheart....you really rackin up the fans...
if I could only write so intelligibly ,
I probably wouldn't
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Re: Hey Stupid
6th Nov 2014 6:39am
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6th Nov 2014 8:06pm
Thank you again, Ed. I don't' know if my writing deserves all that you give to it, but I'm really grateful.
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6th Nov 2014 8:11pm
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6th Nov 2014 8:13pm