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little pretty imp
Little pretty imp of my heart
during last Halloween night
suddenly you tried to scare me
with your surprising grey hair
and your awesome dark lips
But I fall in love of you
and your lips in my neck
are like caresses of petals
You dare not suck my blood
through the wound of my skin
because you are not a vampire
only my forever lover and
I love you, little pretty imp
Published 4th Nov 2014
| Edited 5th Nov 2014
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4th Nov 2014 9:06pm
I did not get that thing about the horrible long teeth but overall I liked your poem -- it's about love after all he he he ...... ♡♡♡ ♡♡♡ ♡♡♡ :)
5th Nov 2014 11:36am
I have changed teeth by lips, I agree that my mind when I wrote the poem was strange. Thank you for your comment, Scarlett, hope the poem is better now.
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