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Long walks in the black of night
Out into the pristine silence
where I look up
and wonder nothing of time,
but only the specks of light
surrounded by distance and night.
where I look up
and wonder nothing of time,
but only the specks of light
surrounded by distance and night.
Published 4th Nov 2014
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4th Nov 2014 6:27pm
I love those moments. Nothing but the senses are required to know everything you need to know about life.
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4th Nov 2014 8:38pm
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5th Nov 2014 00:51am
You know how to pick the lines Gabriel. Every time. Truth in reverse gravitational lensing. :) awesomeness.
Silence we need to meet ourselves.
Darkness we need to look into our souls.
Wonderful!
Darkness we need to look into our souls.
Wonderful!
5th Nov 2014 7:50am
5th Nov 2014 6:56am
call them specks of light, so far away & almost nothing.
& wonder if they see us at all...
& wonder if they see us at all...
5th Nov 2014 7:55am
It's all relative. ;) If you see a star. Just remember that the light has traveled that entire distance to meet your eye, just then, and is now a part of who you are. You can't touch them, they touch you.
5th Nov 2014 1:06pm
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9th Nov 2014 1:00pm
Brilliant writing. What makes most interesting about "NIGHT", is that it hides too many secrets.
14th Nov 2014 7:12pm
