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Lost
his voice is heard in my dreams,
he says I can be free.
I cannot understand why he says this,
I am shackled by my very fears.
his touch lingers,
no matter how many lives we go through.
I feel like am a part of him,
I can smell his scent.
I know him and yet I have not met him before.
He is a part of me,
I can see him when I close my eyes.
I can smell him while I sleep,
longing to feel his touch once again.
he says I can be free.
I cannot understand why he says this,
I am shackled by my very fears.
his touch lingers,
no matter how many lives we go through.
I feel like am a part of him,
I can smell his scent.
I know him and yet I have not met him before.
He is a part of me,
I can see him when I close my eyes.
I can smell him while I sleep,
longing to feel his touch once again.
Published 22nd Apr 2011
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25th Apr 2011 2:58am
i liked this
the last line threw me off a bit;
"longing to feel his touch once again".
because i was thinking you had never met:
"I know him and yet I have not met him before".
mabey this contradiction was intentional,if thats the case "my bad"
all in ,its a nice concept.
good one!!
the last line threw me off a bit;
"longing to feel his touch once again".
because i was thinking you had never met:
"I know him and yet I have not met him before".
mabey this contradiction was intentional,if thats the case "my bad"
all in ,its a nice concept.
good one!!
26th Apr 2011 5:52pm
well it was meant to throw people off to make them think about what I was saying. I wrote this to show that somehow in another life I met him that I knew him yet in this life we have never met that we have never touched or spoken in person and mayhap never will
26th Apr 2011 5:56pm
26th Apr 2011 11:36pm
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