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My happy place
its there
its here
they tell me to go
when ever i feel
that they cant hurt
or torment
or talk about
they cant take it from me
they cant find me
its mine not theres
its calm
quiet
colorful
with the sound of rain
chimes on the roof
i go there all the time
its mine
all mine
its here
they tell me to go
when ever i feel
that they cant hurt
or torment
or talk about
they cant take it from me
they cant find me
its mine not theres
its calm
quiet
colorful
with the sound of rain
chimes on the roof
i go there all the time
its mine
all mine
Published 22nd Apr 2011
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22nd Apr 2011 5:09am
In its simplicity it developes into something not so simple at all. Its hard to explain my take on this poem. Nicely written though.
22nd Apr 2011 2:41pm
i liked it, personnaly i didnt like the rythm to it. you have talent though, keep writing :)
22nd Apr 2011 2:55pm
thank you.... i never really take the time i need for a rythm i just write it as it comes into my head i suppose
