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keep your poetic similes to yourself...
the trees without leaves
seem like cobwebs in
the dark...
but then when you walk
into them they
really hurt..!
seem like cobwebs in
the dark...
but then when you walk
into them they
really hurt..!
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Re: keep your poetic similes to yourself...
2nd Nov 2014 2:03am
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2nd Nov 2014 5:58pm
Re: keep your poetic similes to yourself...
2nd Nov 2014 2:14am
This made me smile. I'm all too familiar with cobwebs, and trees. Only half an hour ago I had untangle myself from spider's web on my way out the door. Good thing it wasn't a tree. :)
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re: Re: keep your poetic similes to yourself...
2nd Nov 2014 5:59pm
Re: keep your poetic similes to yourself...
2nd Nov 2014 11:20am
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2nd Nov 2014 6:01pm
Re: keep your poetic similes to yourself...
2nd Nov 2014 1:20pm
OUCH!!....be careful while your mind is out wandering(wondering)--as daydreaming can be dangerous to your health... ;) x
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re: Re: keep your poetic similes to yourself...
2nd Nov 2014 6:02pm
Re. keep your poetic similes to yourself...
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