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My sunshine

As time passes by
I realize
I need you more
than the moon
needs the sun to shine

Written by naathalie___

(moongirl)

Published 30th Oct 2014

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Re: My sunshine

31st Oct 2014 00:31am

Short n sweet, very round imagery!

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Re: My sunshine

Anonymous

31st Oct 2014 2:26am

Nice.. To the point.. Well written..

Re: My sunshine

4th Nov 2014 3:48am

Heartfelt write. Deep and meaningful.

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Re: My sunshine

4th Nov 2014 10:35pm

Beautiful.

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