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Don’t
You fucking bastard
ambushed me on the department floor.
Near the loo, you shithead!
How fitting.
Don’t look at me that way.
Don’t. Look away!
If you’re hungry, eat in!
Don’t buy your meat and your bread at the same store-
if you catch my drift.
I will not endure your selfishness anymore.
Your sweet-talk makes me feel carious.
You will not make the princess
lose her crown.
Jump in a lake and DROWN!
ambushed me on the department floor.
Near the loo, you shithead!
How fitting.
Don’t look at me that way.
Don’t. Look away!
If you’re hungry, eat in!
Don’t buy your meat and your bread at the same store-
if you catch my drift.
I will not endure your selfishness anymore.
Your sweet-talk makes me feel carious.
You will not make the princess
lose her crown.
Jump in a lake and DROWN!
Published 28th Oct 2014
| Edited 29th Oct 2014
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28th Oct 2014 11:11pm
Un healthy carnivores.. all of 'em
Damn, that's that Marvin Gaye "Here My Dear" shit
Jokers like that, lakes won't hold 'em, but
bad breaks'll fold 'em
Felt.
28th Oct 2014 11:21pm
Carnivores. Yeah. Pull them canines!
I'm just letting out steam but
you got it perfectly right, kriticool.
Thanks for that absolutely great and understanding comment!
I'm just letting out steam but
you got it perfectly right, kriticool.
Thanks for that absolutely great and understanding comment!
28th Oct 2014 11:14pm
if you said anything even close
to this at the time I bet he'll
shop elsewhere...
to this at the time I bet he'll
shop elsewhere...
He better had.
It is so hard to get rid of someone
you gave your heart.
And who took and mauled it.
It is so hard to get rid of someone
you gave your heart.
And who took and mauled it.
29th Oct 2014 2:43am
Bravo Miss Chi!
Some men just don't want to accept when a woman is done and think they can sweet talk their way back. I hope he gets the message.
Some men just don't want to accept when a woman is done and think they can sweet talk their way back. I hope he gets the message.
29th Oct 2014 6:03pm
I hoped that it was right up your ally, mi hermosa hermana :-). The "sugar cane species" has to be gagged. He tried it again today. Came to my office, drooling. As a teacher he is not stupid but maybe too much testosterone clouds his mind. I'll keep you informed :-).
29th Oct 2014 6:12am
Can feel the force of the rejection. Quite a verbal 'knee between the legs' for the stalker. Like the virtue-protecting note in "You will not make the Princess lose her crown".
Ha! I like that you regard this poem as a "verbal kick between the legs" :-). It was meant exactly like that. Thank you! Too, for the hint that you write "lose" with only one "o" :-).
Anonymous
29th Oct 2014 12:44pm
Receiving loud and clear,almost felt you would give a final kick in the back....poisonous write
Oh yes, I'm such a bitch :-). No, it's not a kick in the back, Atia, I use to kneecap people who deserve it face to face. And better to poison someone in thought than by your own hand *lol*.
29th Oct 2014 10:49pm
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30th Oct 2014 12:43pm
Thanks for the agreement with Hashman. I thought we discuss poetry and not teeth and legs? Which teeth, by the way? And many thanks for the "legs aren't bad either" :-))). You guys are sweeties!
9th Dec 2014 9:16pm
