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The Last Friend
[font=Lucida Sans Unicode,Lucida Grande]Rip
You tear though me
Rip
Oh trusty razor I see
Rip
The only way I'm freed
Rip
Dribble, slur, and bleed
Rip
New days come, but not for me
Rip
Trusty razor, the last friend I see[/font]
You tear though me
Rip
Oh trusty razor I see
Rip
The only way I'm freed
Rip
Dribble, slur, and bleed
Rip
New days come, but not for me
Rip
Trusty razor, the last friend I see[/font]
Published 27th Oct 2014
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Anonymous
28th Oct 2014 12:42pm
A sad piece you've written but great flow and interesting structure. I've said this before but it bears repeating: it's normal to have such thoughts but the stronger person will resist them. Awesome work!
28th Oct 2014 12:50pm
Thank you :) I still have passing thoughts, but honestly they just don't stay long enough for me to act on them. Life's hard but I have to keep going... but I might as well write about the hard times if they inspire me...
Anonymous
28th Oct 2014 4:24pm
Nothing wrong with that
28th Oct 2014 4:35pm
