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Another Planet
Another planet,
you and me,
no more bustles
of the city,
no more brains
and no more fright,
we’ll put ourselves,
in the best of light,
we’ll take our comforts,
in doing well,
and all the rest
can go to hell,
they’ll gather round,
to hear the tune,
Hey, where you
from, Babe;
I’m from Neptune.
you and me,
no more bustles
of the city,
no more brains
and no more fright,
we’ll put ourselves,
in the best of light,
we’ll take our comforts,
in doing well,
and all the rest
can go to hell,
they’ll gather round,
to hear the tune,
Hey, where you
from, Babe;
I’m from Neptune.
Published 27th Oct 2014
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Anonymous
27th Oct 2014 1:03am
If only this was possible... Excellent piece!
27th Oct 2014 1:14am
27th Oct 2014 1:09am
27th Oct 2014 1:26am
Thank you. That's really cute. :) Just a few moons yonder way. I love the blue of Neptune. It's the first planet I remember seeing on the news through a satellite. I have some writings on Pluto thought that I'll share sometime, and don't let it bother you that its been downgraded from a planet, that's just those hair splitting bastards at NASA again. My science professor said it was still a planet (on his tests) and always will be :)
27th Oct 2014 2:35am
watta coincidence
DaDa Neptuna is one
of my stage names.
Used for my 'deep' sea movies, which
stopped when my water camera stopped.
see ye 'round 'there', sometime,maybe,p'haps
DaDa Neptuna is one
of my stage names.
Used for my 'deep' sea movies, which
stopped when my water camera stopped.
see ye 'round 'there', sometime,maybe,p'haps
27th Oct 2014 5:23am
What a coincidence, I've been looking for you. Neptune is spokes planet for the solar system, he answers to the Via Galactic which is part of a Local Group of Testudines from Pleurodira. This is how we know that we’re still riding on the back of a turtle in a bottomless sea. Turtles have been around a long time. Are you their leader? ;)
29th Oct 2014 8:00pm
uh,uh....I dunno....I never received any official notification of such
a promotion
I gues snot
27th Oct 2014 6:28am
Pluto has been reclassified as a planet again actually...
Enjoyed, Reita...
Enjoyed, Reita...
Thank goodness! Some of my best friends are Pluto crats and I would hate for them to be all planetless. Ed, maybe your interest will spark something to share with us. It all starts with a headline. Are you familiar with the Pluto files? Its all just so funny, and I've always kept up with it. Ed, call it a plutoid ass plug if you want, butt please tell me why. I love rhetoric and true grit of Pluto. Remember this: Vernacular rhetoric due to culture, which is very important in today’s society, and remember that math is not my fault. The truth is is when facts involve orbit trajectory and calculus ….. skip it. The debate rages on; to infinity and beyond. Thank you Ed, I'm glad you enjoyed the poem.
27th Oct 2014 10:51pm
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20th May 2015 4:30pm
This is great! Like the Little Prince himself who can run the whole planet in a single day and have time to water his flower.
8th Apr 2016 9:23am
Pluto's in the dog house but Neptune..ah the lord of the seas .....to watch triton come up with all of it's friends ....
