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the hammer is hidden
the guns are drawn
the knives are sharp
your fangs are right
as razors
but my hammer is hidden
you look for weakness
I look only to be forgiven
words are my weapons
bullets will fly
knives will cut
but my butterflies will land
my snowflakes will rest
where bullets and knives
cannot reach
where your flesh cannot speak
my hammer is hidden
and you
just walked into
a hurricane of hurt
the knives are sharp
your fangs are right
as razors
but my hammer is hidden
you look for weakness
I look only to be forgiven
words are my weapons
bullets will fly
knives will cut
but my butterflies will land
my snowflakes will rest
where bullets and knives
cannot reach
where your flesh cannot speak
my hammer is hidden
and you
just walked into
a hurricane of hurt
Published 26th Oct 2014
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26th Oct 2014 6:53pm
Powerful imagery! Favourite lines
"but my butterflies will land
my snowflakes will rest
where bullets and knives
cannot reach"
Well done! :-)
"but my butterflies will land
my snowflakes will rest
where bullets and knives
cannot reach"
Well done! :-)
29th Oct 2014 3:48am
I like the play on the phrase "right as rain" with "right as razors". Good stuff. The poem might be more digestible and potent if it was divided into verses. Merely my thought.
30th Oct 2014 4:43am
1st Nov 2014 5:38am
Well written, nice job! "words are my weapons" "you look for weakness", "I look only to be forgiven" extremely deep and powerful lines... This poem truly speaks to the reader. Love the imagery used, and your creativity is beyond amazing!
