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Walk
Wait for me
and walk gently with me
for a moment
beside me
naked
wholly baring
your heart & soul
in a garden
full of delicate flowers
tiptoeing ever so lightly
don't let go of my hand
not now
not ever.
Allow me to drape myself in your branches
and fill me with the scent of your sweet love.
and walk gently with me
for a moment
beside me
naked
wholly baring
your heart & soul
in a garden
full of delicate flowers
tiptoeing ever so lightly
don't let go of my hand
not now
not ever.
Allow me to drape myself in your branches
and fill me with the scent of your sweet love.
Published 26th Oct 2014
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26th Oct 2014 5:20pm
Anonymous
26th Oct 2014 8:34pm
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4th Nov 2014 1:00pm
This poem is beautifully constructed. Paced like walking it flows from word to word gently and delicately towards the ending, a lovers embrace.
Perfect.
Perfect.
26th Nov 2016 8:55pm
What man on the other end of your words wouldn't be breathless with desire from hearing these lines said to him? Had Eve mentioned words like this to Adam, I could understand his eagerness, hunger and an insatiable passion for her.
Beautifully written Shadow.
Beautifully written Shadow.
27th Jan 2020 10:23am
1st Mar 2024 10:42pm
Liked the surreal-ness in this, like a dreamy state and you delivered it with eloquence.
