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PROMISING......REVIEW

I texted her saiding you have risen today to read this good morning.

Playing i asked hello lady friend are you engage if not who would you prefer anyone i might know? she responded saiding i'm not engage.


Every story has it written pages,it would be you silly,resding line for line in my mind celebrating her if valentine.


And she said my feeling for you have never been blind they were clandestine.i responded by saying thanks for having me in mind.


Wow is that so!! that was wonderful to hear,a smile came ear to ear lovely sweetest dear a overwhelming effect,what will be next for the right steps to take as we wait.


And she responded saiding maybe dinner a candle light night date fit for two me and you.


At dinner our eyez tie in with tantalizing feverish heat as we speak to each other,can we be lovers but best friendz.


Where would the line cross without getting lost in the mango mist of things,taking this in holding waist side looking passionately into  her eyez.


Elborated with peaks and valleys to conquer defeat looking for love in all the right places its your worthy wordiness spelled on your face.


Its written for inscription for significance welomes the face value for me to decipher interlocking literary messages you display from the heart.


Meaning what it honestly say and wont lead me astray.


MAK MILLZ\\\\10-1-14 /////GOD DRIVEN FAMZ AND FANZ  
     
Written by Makmillz
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