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12th Oct 2014 3:14pm
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12th Oct 2014 11:07pm
Well you've read my haiku & senryu enough to know I like playing both sides of the coin in writing them ... mi brujita was dressed like a cute bumble bee one summer morning ... coupled with some exquisite picnics we had ... And a night of watching her dance ... And viola !
Thanks for the read as always.
Thanks for the read as always.
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13th Oct 2014 7:27am
The underlying sense hasn't escaped my eyes but chose to stay on the safe side regarding your lines "just" as a haiku :-).
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3rd Nov 2014 5:34pm
Yes, you know very well I like a bit of word play ... But it's all natural.
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I turned the 50 inch monitor on here at the Haiku
Erotic Restaurant so we could all enjoy reading your haiku.
We love sweets here, and were co-incidently enjoying our latest craze (more on this later) while imagining that bumble bee wallowing in Nirvana!
Erotic Restaurant so we could all enjoy reading your haiku.
We love sweets here, and were co-incidently enjoying our latest craze (more on this later) while imagining that bumble bee wallowing in Nirvana!
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14th Oct 2014 6:31am
Haiku - erotica - food and a 50 inch television ... I gotta find this place. Sounds like a writer's paradise.
Thanks for stopping by.
Thanks for stopping by.
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3rd Nov 2014 00:01am
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3rd Nov 2014 5:35pm