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Goodbye
I thought that maybe you were different.
You said you loved me. You really never gave fuck.
I thought you were different, from the others.
I was married once, and thought that you would be the next.
I'm just a fucking fool, to think that I can find true love.
Every time, I find something special, it's raped an taken from me.
The triumph of love revolves, but not in my world.
Love always dies in my world. Hatered consumes me.
I just a god damn piece of shit.
Good bye everybody, my time has come.
I must leave you all behind, I really have to go.
When I do myself in.......
I CAN TRIUMPH AT LAST!!!!
You said you loved me. You really never gave fuck.
I thought you were different, from the others.
I was married once, and thought that you would be the next.
I'm just a fucking fool, to think that I can find true love.
Every time, I find something special, it's raped an taken from me.
The triumph of love revolves, but not in my world.
Love always dies in my world. Hatered consumes me.
I just a god damn piece of shit.
Good bye everybody, my time has come.
I must leave you all behind, I really have to go.
When I do myself in.......
I CAN TRIUMPH AT LAST!!!!
Published 12th Oct 2014
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12th Oct 2014 5:12am
12th Oct 2014 5:15am
such a sad meaningful poem. if its more than just a poem, im sure you are not a piece of shit. peple are.
the poem is really good though, i like the way you set your stanzas, your choice of words and the effects it has on a reader.
the poem is really good though, i like the way you set your stanzas, your choice of words and the effects it has on a reader.
12th Oct 2014 2:32pm
It's dark and ominous ... Speaks to a true crucifixion of the heart ...
There are a couple of grammatical errors in the piece ... but leave them ... They don't wreck the flow and they add to the rawness.
Hope you find true peace in THIS life if that's what you seek.
There are a couple of grammatical errors in the piece ... but leave them ... They don't wreck the flow and they add to the rawness.
Hope you find true peace in THIS life if that's what you seek.
12th Oct 2014 3:19pm
An honest piece and full of rage. I just hope you are much more stronger(reality) than your words.
Hold on RAVE and remember no battle fought without loss and pain.
Hold on RAVE and remember no battle fought without loss and pain.
12th Oct 2014 4:39pm
This is the way unfortunately most marriages and relationships are in the world today. But you can never go wrong with Rosey Palm she's always the same, unemotional and will never let you down.
