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Total Submission
I offer my multitude of gifts
Lay them at your feet
Hoping they are acceptable
To a man such as you
I totally submit
Both hands raised high
As these urges flood me
With uncontrollable needs
Kneeling at your feet
Begging for acceptance
Please, Sir do not turn me down
My humble advances
Am I woman enough
To satisfy your hunger?
I pray that I am
Please allow me to prove it
Will the taste of me lingering on your tongue
Increase that appetite?
If your answers are yes.....
I am ALL YOURS to feast upon Sir
Lay them at your feet
Hoping they are acceptable
To a man such as you
I totally submit
Both hands raised high
As these urges flood me
With uncontrollable needs
Kneeling at your feet
Begging for acceptance
Please, Sir do not turn me down
My humble advances
Am I woman enough
To satisfy your hunger?
I pray that I am
Please allow me to prove it
Will the taste of me lingering on your tongue
Increase that appetite?
If your answers are yes.....
I am ALL YOURS to feast upon Sir
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Re: Total Submission
10th Oct 2014 6:32pm
LSB, well written piece. However, I think he should be begging you.
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11th Oct 2014 5:46pm
He never needs to beg
At a moments notice im his hun
Glad u liked it hun
At a moments notice im his hun
Glad u liked it hun
Re: Total Submission
10th Oct 2014 6:32pm
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11th Oct 2014 5:49pm
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10th Oct 2014 6:56pm
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11th Oct 2014 5:59pm
I am so humbled by the comparison
She was a woman way ahead of her time
The Story of O is one of my all time favorite books
Thank you darlin
She was a woman way ahead of her time
The Story of O is one of my all time favorite books
Thank you darlin
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10th Oct 2014 6:57pm
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11th Oct 2014 6:01pm
Oh PM...I am sure a man who writes the way thst u do has his own willing lil grl tucked away some place lol
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10th Oct 2014 11:21pm
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11th Oct 2014 6:03pm
Mr Feddeler the rewards will b felt by us both if he chooses me hun
Thanx for the read darlin
Thanx for the read darlin
Re: Total Submission
11th Oct 2014 7:27pm
You really put yourself out there with this one Belle. Raw and revealing write. I'm sure he will not be able to turn you down.
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12th Oct 2014 1:00am
Im trying to b more raw n honest....
So it does show?
Its not the easiest thing to do
Glad to know it shows
Only time will tell how he feels darlin
Hope ur right
So it does show?
Its not the easiest thing to do
Glad to know it shows
Only time will tell how he feels darlin
Hope ur right
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13th Oct 2014 4:47pm
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13th Oct 2014 7:09pm
Casket hun that is quite the comment
U sound like a hungry boy
Glad u liked it
U sound like a hungry boy
Glad u liked it