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Unbridled Passion
My great and mighty Stallion
Came galloping through my dreams again
With great speed
He entered my open bedroom window
Jumping the fences
That space and time have created
Not allowing them to hold us back
My glorious Steed broke through once again
Feeling him nuzzle and nibble my flesh
The heat of his licks
Causing steam to rise
My own tongue begging for a taste
Mount me my Stallion
Show me how badly I'm wanted
Don't hold anything back
Release the beast at your core Sir
My screams of ecstasy reach out
Touching you where you lay
Off lost within your own dream
Of the carnal pleasures shared by the two of us
Came galloping through my dreams again
With great speed
He entered my open bedroom window
Jumping the fences
That space and time have created
Not allowing them to hold us back
My glorious Steed broke through once again
Feeling him nuzzle and nibble my flesh
The heat of his licks
Causing steam to rise
My own tongue begging for a taste
Mount me my Stallion
Show me how badly I'm wanted
Don't hold anything back
Release the beast at your core Sir
My screams of ecstasy reach out
Touching you where you lay
Off lost within your own dream
Of the carnal pleasures shared by the two of us
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Re: Unbridled Passion
9th Oct 2014 5:42pm
LSB, this is breathtaking in its passion and imagery...the pic. is so apropos and exciting...you made this reader chomp at the bit. Brava bella poeta!
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9th Oct 2014 5:46pm
GW my darlin friend u humble me with this gracious comment
Glad u enjoyed it darlin
Glad u enjoyed it darlin
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9th Oct 2014 5:59pm
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9th Oct 2014 7:40pm
Wheeeeeww!!! Awesomely passionate n very hott stuff lady!
U burn when you spill you know! lol
U burn when you spill you know! lol
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re: Re: Unbridled Passion
9th Oct 2014 8:34pm
What can i say darlin....he brings it out of me
Glad u liked my lil write. Thanx darlin
Glad u liked my lil write. Thanx darlin
Re: Unbridled Passion
9th Oct 2014 8:40pm
The horsey imagery in both the poem and pic fit in well with the title.
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9th Oct 2014 8:52pm
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9th Oct 2014 11:17pm
I can feel the burning passion in this write Belle. It comes galloping through.
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re: Re: Unbridled Passion
11th Oct 2014 6:40pm
Im a very passionate woman X
So glad it shows hun
Thanx for the read hun
So glad it shows hun
Thanx for the read hun
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Anonymous
10th Oct 2014 00:44am
Belle,
Wheeee-Doggies!!! You are the feed bag this starving old hoss wants strapped on! You can ride me hard and put me up wet any old time! :-)
tornado
Wheeee-Doggies!!! You are the feed bag this starving old hoss wants strapped on! You can ride me hard and put me up wet any old time! :-)
tornado

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11th Oct 2014 6:42pm
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10th Oct 2014 6:27am
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11th Oct 2014 6:59pm
Oh Mr Feddeler u just have no idea how wild it could b hahaha
Glad u enjoyed the experience hun
Glad u enjoyed the experience hun
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10th Oct 2014 1:17pm
Unbridled passion. The title is amazing & it just gets better with each word. Congratulations on an amazing poem. The passion & the use of a horse which is created to be ridden is outstanding. Ty
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11th Oct 2014 7:01pm
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10th Oct 2014 5:53pm
I just love how you say "nibble my flesh". It sound so carnal and humanistic and free, and the word flesh flows from the tongue and rides the teeth in the "sh" sound and it lingers and slowly and suddenly ceases. You, Miss, are in real good touch with your way of expression because you can make something as abstract as desires become tangible as if your words gained life. In fact,they can live in my sensual imaginations.
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11th Oct 2014 7:04pm
DM darlin im so flattered by ur comment
It has left me at a loss for words
Yet a simple ty doesnt seem to b enough
It has left me at a loss for words
Yet a simple ty doesnt seem to b enough
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11th Oct 2014 7:09pm