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Don't close your eyes.

Don't close your eyes.

It's all around us, it's inside us.

Fear.

Do you hear it? It's calling my name.

The devil. He's playing a game.

He won't leave until he sees me hang.

Suicide.

It's on my mind. Should I do it?

No.

That little voice whispers...

"Jump"

I feel the rope tight around my neck.

Can't breath. Can't think.

The last words on my lips..

"I love you"

And hope that somewhere somehow you'll hear me.


I'll be six feet under when you finnaly open your eyes.

They've been closed for to long..

Don't close your eyes.
Written by dontask
Published | Edited 9th Oct 2014
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