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Instincts
The words that you say to me
Do unspeakable things
To my mind, body and soul
Animalistic instincts take over
Thoughts of you makes my blood boil
Sending soaring heat throughout
Only your salty beads of sweat
Will be able to quench my undying thirst
Craving to taste your very essence
Feeling your heart beat increase
Longing to devour your molten seed
Waiting in anticipation for your eruption
Tame my inner beast Sir
Take complete control over her
Train me.....teach me what pleases you
Most of all please FEED ME
Do unspeakable things
To my mind, body and soul
Animalistic instincts take over
Thoughts of you makes my blood boil
Sending soaring heat throughout
Only your salty beads of sweat
Will be able to quench my undying thirst
Craving to taste your very essence
Feeling your heart beat increase
Longing to devour your molten seed
Waiting in anticipation for your eruption
Tame my inner beast Sir
Take complete control over her
Train me.....teach me what pleases you
Most of all please FEED ME
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Re: Instincts
7th Oct 2014 2:07pm
What a beautiful sunrise poem full of delicious imagery. The sense of urgency in this piece is super-erotic.
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7th Oct 2014 9:31pm
What can i say GW darlin.....sometimes satisfaction cant cum fast enough
Glad u liked it hun
Glad u liked it hun
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7th Oct 2014 2:35pm
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7th Oct 2014 6:26pm
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Anonymous
7th Oct 2014 9:06pm
Belle,
Love how your instincts kick in at feeding time :-) Very 'controlled' write! Enjoyed!
tornado
Love how your instincts kick in at feeding time :-) Very 'controlled' write! Enjoyed!
tornado
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7th Oct 2014 9:35pm
If more of us followed our instincts
We would ALL b much more satisfied n our lives
Dont u agree darlin?
We would ALL b much more satisfied n our lives
Dont u agree darlin?
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7th Oct 2014 9:24pm
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9th Oct 2014 3:06pm
Honestly im unsure
Thought it was a cheetah. Ill do a lil research hun
Thought it was a cheetah. Ill do a lil research hun
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7th Oct 2014 9:53pm
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9th Oct 2014 3:10pm
Glad u enjoyed it hun
I always write exactly what im feeling n that moment
I always write exactly what im feeling n that moment
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8th Oct 2014 1:30pm
Mmmmmm yea... To feed n be fed, THAT
is the blessing lol... outstanding heat my dear!
is the blessing lol... outstanding heat my dear!
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9th Oct 2014 3:11pm
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8th Oct 2014 9:14pm
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9th Oct 2014 3:13pm
Well my darlin im always 100% true to who i am
Glad u enjoyed my lil write
Glad u enjoyed my lil write
Re: Instincts
9th Oct 2014 11:32am
Animal instincts so strong throughout. That hunger so evident. The desperation to feed & be fed reveals the animal deep within....although sometimes not so deep.
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9th Oct 2014 3:15pm
Too many people try too fight what comes naturally
I say.....give n and enjoy eachother
I say.....give n and enjoy eachother
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9th Oct 2014 10:52pm
I can hear the growl in your voice Belle. As though you've spotted your prey and are ready to pounce.
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