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Just Breathe
When I know your eyes
Are looking my way
My heart flutters
Most of all though
I cannot catch my breath
Your touch sends trembles
Down my spine
Chill bumps totally cover
Every inch of skin
Rendering me breathless yet again
Kisses from your warm moist lips
Regardless of where
You strategically place them
Cause me to go flush
Air escaping my grasp
If not for you Sir
Your whispered reminders
Sensually in my ear
Almost as if giving me permission
"Just breathe, my Angel, breathe."
Are looking my way
My heart flutters
Most of all though
I cannot catch my breath
Your touch sends trembles
Down my spine
Chill bumps totally cover
Every inch of skin
Rendering me breathless yet again
Kisses from your warm moist lips
Regardless of where
You strategically place them
Cause me to go flush
Air escaping my grasp
If not for you Sir
Your whispered reminders
Sensually in my ear
Almost as if giving me permission
"Just breathe, my Angel, breathe."
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1st Oct 2014 4:27pm
Re: Just Breathe
1st Oct 2014 3:38pm
Much like the other poems I've read of your's, you find a great balance between erotic and emotional. Nice write! Oh and your descriptions of sensations are awesome!
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re: Re: Just Breathe
1st Oct 2014 4:31pm
Anthony darlin u humble me
I just simply share my true emotions n feeling
Theres true freedom n allowing myself to feel n share honestly
Ty so very much hun
I just simply share my true emotions n feeling
Theres true freedom n allowing myself to feel n share honestly
Ty so very much hun
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1st Oct 2014 6:04pm
You have often, if not always, taken my breath away with your writings. And many time you have breathed new life into me with your words. A most satisfying respiratory cycle
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re: Re: Just Breathe
1st Oct 2014 7:26pm
GW darlin' ur very gracious comment has left at a loss for words hun
Thank you is no where near enough
Thank you is no where near enough
Re: Just Breathe
1st Oct 2014 11:15pm
You relate the excitement well Belle. It's like the first touch between two people that haven't been together for a long time. It's magical.
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2nd Oct 2014 7:44pm
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2nd Oct 2014 12:51pm
Romantic, sweet verse n visions... Gotta tell
you my dear, you never cease to amaze me with
passionate inks! :)
you my dear, you never cease to amaze me with
passionate inks! :)
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2nd Oct 2014 7:45pm