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Midnight Soak
Candles lit around the room
Perfect setting for complete relaxation
Chilled bottle of wine
One lone glass
Steam quickly filling the room
Is it rising from the water
Urgently streaming from the faucet
Or from within my poetic desires for you
As I sip from my glass
My taste buds left longing
Unsatisfied by the sweet grape
Longing for the taste of your manhood
As my mind wanders
Into deep thoughts of our conversations
My hand follows suit
Needing the touch of you
Tidal waves begin forming
Deep within the heated pool
Sloshing water keeping rhythm
With the song of the eternal lust we share
Music escaping my lips
With each moan and sigh
Dreaming of your masterful fingers
Strumming knowingly along
My hips rising to meet the sky
As unfulfilled fantasies of you, my Man
Take full control
All of my senses longing for more
Climatic release approaches
As my throbbing flesh swells
Begging me to submerge deeper into myself
Bringing forth gutorial primal screams
Laying back enjoying my soak
Reaching for the bottle and glass
Satisfied and completely sated
Thoughts are still only of you
Hmmmm.....seems that I spoke too soon
My body is now begging for me to continue
Oh babydoll how you seduce me
Even when you are not here with me Sir
Perfect setting for complete relaxation
Chilled bottle of wine
One lone glass
Steam quickly filling the room
Is it rising from the water
Urgently streaming from the faucet
Or from within my poetic desires for you
As I sip from my glass
My taste buds left longing
Unsatisfied by the sweet grape
Longing for the taste of your manhood
As my mind wanders
Into deep thoughts of our conversations
My hand follows suit
Needing the touch of you
Tidal waves begin forming
Deep within the heated pool
Sloshing water keeping rhythm
With the song of the eternal lust we share
Music escaping my lips
With each moan and sigh
Dreaming of your masterful fingers
Strumming knowingly along
My hips rising to meet the sky
As unfulfilled fantasies of you, my Man
Take full control
All of my senses longing for more
Climatic release approaches
As my throbbing flesh swells
Begging me to submerge deeper into myself
Bringing forth gutorial primal screams
Laying back enjoying my soak
Reaching for the bottle and glass
Satisfied and completely sated
Thoughts are still only of you
Hmmmm.....seems that I spoke too soon
My body is now begging for me to continue
Oh babydoll how you seduce me
Even when you are not here with me Sir
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Re: Midnight Soak
30th Sep 2014 10:04am
titillating in its imagery.
provocative as it draws one in...
tending hands to wander in concert with the imagination ;-p
provocative as it draws one in...
tending hands to wander in concert with the imagination ;-p
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Nice to know hun that mine r not the only wandering hands lol
Glad u liked my lil write
Glad u liked my lil write
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2nd Oct 2014 10:41am
yes your work insights to the creative contemplative!
wandering oft leads to a worthy purpose ;)
wandering oft leads to a worthy purpose ;)
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Re: Midnight Soak
30th Sep 2014 12:25pm
Great job love your wordplay
You are great at painting vivid images of the scenes you create
You are great at painting vivid images of the scenes you create
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1st Oct 2014 5:56pm
Thanx Malcom hun
I truly enjoy getting the opnion of somebody new
Thanx for giving me a read
I truly enjoy getting the opnion of somebody new
Thanx for giving me a read
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30th Sep 2014 12:30pm
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Re: Midnight Soak
30th Sep 2014 12:42pm
Sweet Belle this is awesome. You invite the reader to strip down and join you in this erotic cleansing....this stanza is phenomenal:
"Tidal waves begin forming
Deep within the heated pool
Sloshing water keeping rhythm
With the song of the eternal lust we share"
I bow to your magnificent sensuality.
"Tidal waves begin forming
Deep within the heated pool
Sloshing water keeping rhythm
With the song of the eternal lust we share"
I bow to your magnificent sensuality.
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re: Re: Midnight Soak
1st Oct 2014 7:32pm
GW ty darlin
Nice to know im getting my feelings n thoughts across so well
Nice to know im getting my feelings n thoughts across so well
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30th Sep 2014 4:32pm
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Re: Midnight Soak
30th Sep 2014 11:18pm
This is extremely hot Belle. Makes me want to jump in the tub with you. Enjoyed.
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re: Re: Midnight Soak
1st Oct 2014 7:39pm
Hmmmmm....does it Mr X?
Must mean that i got my point across. Lol
Glad u enjoyed it hun
Must mean that i got my point across. Lol
Glad u enjoyed it hun
Re: Midnight Soak
1st Oct 2014 2:50am
Only a master of seduction can be seduced in such a way, you are truly bathing us with thoughts of seduction most can only dream. Seductress seduced, what a pleasurable read.
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1st Oct 2014 7:45pm
Im a seductress Sir?
Never thought of myself as such
Coming from u ill gladly accept that title
And continue doing my best to keep u enticed
Never thought of myself as such
Coming from u ill gladly accept that title
And continue doing my best to keep u enticed
Re: Midnight Soak
Anonymous
1st Oct 2014 4:04am
Belle,
The heat....the steam....I'm with everyone else.....stripped down and.........here cums your tidal wave.......CannonBall!!!!!! LOL!!! Fins Up! :-)
tornado
The heat....the steam....I'm with everyone else.....stripped down and.........here cums your tidal wave.......CannonBall!!!!!! LOL!!! Fins Up! :-)
tornado
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re: Re: Midnight Soak
1st Oct 2014 7:48pm
Now Mr Tornado....just who is gonna clean up the mess ur cannon ball left behind? Hahaha
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